Sick and tired of feeling like this?

Outlining like crazy but you’re still lost in the middle of your story.

Overwhelmed with your plot and you have no idea where to go.

Like your characters are strangers you can’t figure out.

You know there’s something wrong but can’t pinpoint it.

Hopeless that the book of your heart will never get finished because you keep getting stuck in act one.

You know the pacing is off but have no idea how to fix it.

Totally stressed out because you’ve already written the story twice!

Scattered and confused with all the different characters and side stories.

On edge because you feel like you’ve fallen completely behind.

You think your book isn’t even worth the effort anymore.

You’re frustrated with the entire writing process.

Out of control with all the magic systems you’ve created.

Sick and tired of feeling like this?

Outlining like crazy but you’re still lost in the middle of your story.

Overwhelmed with your plot and you have no idea where to go.

Like your characters are strangers you can’t figure out.

You know there’s something wrong but can’t pinpoint it.

Hopeless that the book of your heart will never get finished because you keep getting stuck in act one.

You know the pacing is off but have no idea how to fix it.

Totally stressed out because you’ve already written the story twice!

Scattered and confused with all the different characters and side stories.

On edge because you feel like you’ve fallen completely behind.

You think your book isn’t even worth the effort anymore.

You’re frustrated with the entire writing process.

Out of control with all the magic systems you’ve created.

It sucks!

But you’re not alone.

Now imagine this.

Reinvigorated! The story is finally clicking and you know exactly what you need to do!

Like the creative well has been replenished and the water is flowing! The ideas are rushing through you.

You’re having fun! It’s been so long since writing the story didn’t feel like this huge chore and not it feels great.

Hello, old friends! Your characters feel fresh and awesome. You’ve figured out what makes them tick and how they can really interact with the plot in super fun ways.

Hopeful with new perspective. You see your story and its structure and have a clear plan to make that structure as strong as can be.

Like you’re Indiana freakin’ Jones and you’ve unearthed a treasure! You knew a fantastic story was underneath all the plot threads somewhere and now? You’ve found it the true heart and soul of your book!

Something inside you has clicked. You feel like the pieces have fallen into place and it’s such a relief and wonder! You know what to do!

“She helped me with my novel, giving me encouraging comments as well as notes on how to make my prose, dialogue and action stronger. Bethany’s feedback is just what I needed. She helped me with my novel, giving me encouraging comments as well as notes on how to make my prose, dialogue and action stronger. She is insightful as a reader and has a great mind for how to play to an author’s strengths.”

Catherine Bakewell, YA and MG author repped by New Leaf Literary and Media, Inc.

I have spent the last decade of my life helping writers

realize their stories and realize their dreams.

“Bethany has been a great help in improving my query letter. She took my original letter and not only enhanced it, but allowed me to see my story differently which led to a much needed revision. She is timely and provides excellent feedback to make your work the best it can be!” – Ashyle Noelle, YA fantasy author.

“I was extremely impressed with her attention to detail as well as her ability to recommend material modifications to the book. At all times she was professional, patient and pleasurable to work with but she was not afraid to show me the mistakes I had made.” – Brad Franc, bestselling author of The Succession Solution

Working with Bethany was like a second voice in my head. Her critique was everything I wanted my story to say but didn’t yet, and she knew exactly what it needed. I was struggling with word count for trad publishing and deepening inner voice for my MC and Bethany knew how to pull both out of me, making me a better writer and my story have so much more depth. It’s obvious she loves reading and it comes out of her with understanding and so much patience.” – Cindy Kehagiaras, romance author
“No one thing that I have done in the past five years has had a more positive impact on my writing than the decision to have Bethany critique my work. I can always count on her to provide a critique that is thorough and comments that are meticulous, yet practical and to the point. Her candid evaluation and steady encouragement have helped me get the most out of every chapter, and I have benefitted immensely from her expertise and understanding of the craft.” – Christopher Tobias, YA fantasy author

“Bethany is an experienced author and editor, and she has provided me with invaluable feedback on my manuscripts. The developmental edits improved the flow of the story and added authenticity to my characters. The critiques are presented respectfully, with explanations related to the genre of the manuscript and today’s literary market. Bethany is a pleasure to work with and I would recommend her services as a great option for other writers trying to break into the publishing industry.”- Heather Stewart, YA fantasy and sci-fi author and Editor

And I’d love to help you.

I have spent the last decade of my life helping writers realize their stories and realize their dreams.

“Bethany has been a great help in improving my query letter. She took my original letter and not only enhanced it, but allowed me to see my story differently which led to a much needed revision. She is timely and provides excellent feedback to make your work the best it can be!” – Ashyle Noelle, YA fantasy author.

“I was extremely impressed with her attention to detail as well as her ability to recommend material modifications to the book. At all times she was professional, patient and pleasurable to work with but she was not afraid to show me the mistakes I had made.” – Brad Franc, bestselling author of The Succession Solution

Working with Bethany was like a second voice in my head. Her critique was everything I wanted my story to say but didn’t yet, and she knew exactly what it needed. I was struggling with word count for trad publishing and deepening inner voice for my MC and Bethany knew how to pull both out of me, making me a better writer and my story have so much more depth. It’s obvious she loves reading and it comes out of her with understanding and so much patience.” – Cindy Kehagiaras, romance author
“No one thing that I have done in the past five years has had a more positive impact on my writing than the decision to have Bethany critique my work. I can always count on her to provide a critique that is thorough and comments that are meticulous, yet practical and to the point. Her candid evaluation and steady encouragement have helped me get the most out of every chapter, and I have benefitted immensely from her expertise and understanding of the craft.” – Christopher Tobias, YA fantasy author

“Bethany is an experienced author and editor, and she has provided me with invaluable feedback on my manuscripts. The developmental edits improved the flow of the story and added authenticity to my characters. The critiques are presented respectfully, with explanations related to the genre of the manuscript and today’s literary market. Bethany is a pleasure to work with and I would recommend her services as a great option for other writers trying to break into the publishing industry.”- Heather Stewart, YA fantasy and sci-fi author and Editor

And I’d love to help you.

Query Edit Package:

Want to really impress that dream agent of yours? You have one shot so let’s make sure you hit bull’s eye.

The Query Edit Package is a comprehensive edit of your query and first thirty pages. I’ll be looking for:

*Readability

*Consistency

*Voice

*Setting

*Mood and Atmosphere

*Logic

*Hook Strength – if it grabs the reader

Inline comments are included so you can get the specific feedback and actionable advice you need to make your first impression the best one it can be.

Investment: $200

Consultation:

Got a question? Hit a roadblock? Can’t figure something out? Call me. We can discuss your concerns, questions, the state of publishing if you’d like. No topic is off limits.

*Plot Issues

*Character Crafting

*Self-Publish vs Trad Publish

*Best Vendors to Use

*Story Gut Check

*Query Plan

*Storytelling Elements

A consult with me is a one hour confidential, creative mastermind that is advice-centered and from the perspective of someone who’s been in the industry for over a decade. Build up your knowledge, assuage your worries, and get yourself going with confidence.

Investment: $250

“In a perfect world, we’d all be walking around with a tiny Bethany in our pockets. Bethany is a gem. In the few weeks I’ve known her, she has: helped me make the right decision in choosing an agent, helped me get unstuck with my WIP, and generally pushed me to do better in my writing career. I’ve spent over $1,000 on a professional editor for one of my books, and her input was nowhere near as helpful as Bethany’s. I can go on and on about how insightful and brilliant Bethany is, but TL;DR: Bethany is the best and if you want to improve your MS you need her!”

Jesse Sutanto, bestselling author of the breakout novel Dial A For Aunties, soon to be a Netflix show.

“In a perfect world, we’d all be walking around with a tiny Bethany in our pockets. Bethany is a gem. In the few weeks I’ve known her, she has: helped me make the right decision in choosing an agent, helped me get unstuck with my WIP, and generally pushed me to do better in my writing career. I’ve spent over $1,000 on a professional editor for one of my books, and her input was nowhere near as helpful as Bethany’s. I can go on and on about how insightful and brilliant Bethany is, but TL;DR: Bethany is the best and if you want to improve your MS you need her!”

Jesse Sutanto, bestselling author of the breakout novel Dial A For Aunties, soon to be a Netflix show.

WORKING ONE-ON-ONE

It can be hard seeing where your own work might be laggin’ or draggin’. I’m proud to be that new set of eyes on your story so it can be critically examined with an unbiased view and experienced perspective.

Hiring an editor is a huge step in your writing journey, and sharing your story with a stranger is extremely vulnerable and brave. Expect constructive and actionable feedback but never rude or demeaning feedback.

The edit you’ll receive from me will be ultra-specific to your book but also focus on timeless principals of storytelling. You’ll be able to apply my notes to not only the story we work on, but the next and the next. We’ll use your own story to help sharpen your editorial eye. 

My goal is simple: I want to help you make your story better in less time with less struggle. There’s a gap between where your book is now and where you want it to be and I can help you bridge that gap. I’ve helped writers nail that query and get full requests. I’ve helped them uplevel their draft and sell it to trad publishers. The edits you’ll get from me are based on experience and results, not shots in the dark and guess work.

I will help you:

Streamline your plot so it can support your wonderful themes for maximum emotional payoff and impact for the reader.

Better understand story mechanics such as goal, motivation, conflict, rising action, escalating stakes, how to set mood, tone and atmosphere, and how to best use anchoring details to ensure your scenes come alive.

Start your story in the right place, guide you through the murky middle, and make sure you end on a high note so your story connects and delights.

Put your creativity on full blast so you can write the characters of your heart and ensure all their intensity, chemistry, wants, needs, desires and fears integrate and combine to craft truly special people (or robots, or animals, or aliens) that readers will love.

Feel good about your story again. Feel confident in its structure, believability, world, and readability. 

BUT WAIT!

THERE’S MORE!

I want you to have everything you need for revision success. Which is why you’ll receive these amazing resources I only offer to my one-one-one writers totaling a savings of over $780!

Revise Your Manuscript Like An Absolute Boss Kit. This amazing kit includes some of my favorite planning tools so you can get even more organized and clear on your revisions. Included is the Revise Your Manuscript Like An Absolute Boss PDF, a revision tracker sheet, an awesome made-just-for-writers planner page, and a special suprise bonus that I know you’ll love. Made with care and designed for your success, this kit is the perfect companion to working with me one-on-one.

Price: $249

Your Price: $0

 

Refresh Your Brain and Unleash Your Creativity Meditations. These two amazing guided meditations are pure joy and renewal. They’ll help you refresh after a long day at work so you can sit down and write. They’ll also help you tap into your creativity so when you need to figure something out, you can.

Price: $39

Your Price: $0

 

Two Phone Consults. You’ll have your first hour consult before work begins so we can discuss any specific concerns you have. And then you’ll have a second one hour phone call where we’ll go over all of your notes to make sure you have clarity and confidence in tackling them. We can also talk next steps in terms of career and publishing.

Price: $500

Your Price: $0

I do not offer the Revise Your Manuscript Like An Absolute Boss Kit or the meditations anywhere else. So get started with me now.  

I want you to have everything you need for revision success. Which is why you’ll receive these amazing resources I only offer to my one-one-one writers totaling a savings of over $780!

Revise Your Manuscript Like An Absolute Boss Kit. This amazing kit includes some of my favorite planning tools so you can get even more organized and clear on your revisions. Included is the Revise Your Manuscript Like An Absolute Boss PDF, a revision tracker sheet, an awesome made-just-for-writers planner page, and a special suprise bonus that I know you’ll love. Made with care and designed for your success, this kit is the perfect companion to working with me one-on-one.

Price: $249

Your Price: $0

 

Refresh Your Brain and Unleash Your Creativity Meditations. These two amazing guided meditations are pure joy and renewal. They’ll help you refresh after a long day at work so you can sit down and write. They’ll also help you tap into your creativity so when you need to figure something out, you can.

Price: $39

Your Price: $0

 

Two Phone Consults. You’ll have your first hour consult before work begins so we can discuss any specific concerns you have. And then you’ll have a second one hour phone call where we’ll go over all of your notes to make sure you have clarity and confidence in tackling them. We can also talk next steps in terms of career and publishing.

Price: $500

Your Price: $0

 

I do not offer the Revise Your Manuscript Like An Absolute Boss Kit or the meditations anywhere else. So get started with me now.  

Start now.

For as little as $200.


“When I needed her most, Bethany came to my rescue with succinct edits and a can-do attitude. Her suggestions were thoughtful, insightful, and made my work shine in a way I never would have been able to do on my own.”

Anthony Nerada, YA author repped by the Deborah Harris Agency

Start now.

For as little as $200.


“When I needed her most, Bethany came to my rescue with succinct edits and a can-do attitude. Her suggestions were thoughtful, insightful, and made my work shine in a way I never would have been able to do on my own.”

Anthony Nerada, YA author repped by the Deborah Harris Agency

“Bethany is not only a force of positivity, but she also has a sharp eye for improvement across both the sweeping plot level and line-by-line revisions. She’s a synopsis magician and an editing master. You couldn’t ask to have a better editor in your corner!”

T.C. Kemper, MG author repped by the Jennifer De Chiara Literary Agency

“Working with Bethany was such a pleasure! She is knowledgeable, honest and an excellent communicator. She was able to pinpoint weaknesses in my work and provide feedback on how to overcome them.”

Toyin Adek, women’s fiction author repped by Writers House

Whether you’re trying to make your query stand out or nail the voice in your opening pages or work through the structure of a messy middle, Bethany is here to help! Whatever stage you’re at, she knows just what your story needs and has the expertise to make it shine. There’s nobody better to help you transform your writing.”

Kyra Nelson, YA author & Editor

What your feedback may look like:

Choose the services you need.

Query Edit Package

Having trouble boiling down your 100,000 word story into a cohesive, fun, attention-grabbing query? Need some one-on-one, professional eyes to tell you if you’re story is starting in the right place? Second-guessing where things need emphasized, where voice needs heightened, where the sentence structure needs tightened? Then you want the Query Edit Package. It’s a very deep dive into the first impression you make to literary agents, and I make sure that you put your best foot forward. 

Phone Consultation

A consult with me is a one hour confidential, creative mastermind that is advice-centered and from the perspective of someone who’s been in the industry for over a decade. Build up your knowledge, assuage your worries, and get yourself going with confidence. We can discuss anything from if you’re plot makes sense to if your main character has enough at stake. We can go over story escalation and how to make sure there’s tension on every page. We can discuss how to self-publish or query agents. Your journey is unique and so special. Get one-on-one advice that takes in all the nuances and specifics of what you want and need.

Full Manuscript Edit

This is a the deepest of dives into your manuscript that also includes inline comments to get as specific as possible with revisions. I heavily focus on elements such as:

*Character chemistry

*Character arc

*Goal, Motivation, Conflict

*Readability and story flow

*Logic

*World Building

*Making sure the story starts in the right place

*Believability/surprise in plot twists

*Story structure

*Dialogue

*Activity on the page and rising tension

*Stakes and escalation

 After a complete and thorough read of your manuscript, you’ll receive:

*On page comments

*Detailed edit report

*Two one hour phone consults

*Revise Your Manuscript Like An Absolute Boss Kit

Refresh Your Brain and Unleash Your Creativity Meditations

 

$30/1000 words

Full Manuscript Evaluation

Budget-friendly but still incredibly detailed and invaluable, this manuscript evaluaton heavily focuses on elements such as:

*Character chemistry

*Character arc

*Goal, Motivation, Conflict

*Readability and story flow

*Logic

*World Building

*Making sure the story starts in the right place

*Believability/surprise in plot twists

*Story structure

*Dialogue

*Activity on the page and rising tension

*Stakes and escalation

 After a complete and thorough read of your manuscript, you’ll receive:

*Detailed edit report

*Two one hour phone consults

*Revise Your Manuscript Like An Absolute Boss Kit

*Refresh Your Brain and Unleash Your Creativity Meditations

 

 

$24/1000 words

Choose the services you need.

Query Edit Package

Having trouble boiling down your 100,000 word story into a cohesive, fun, attention-grabbing query? Need some one-on-one, professional eyes to tell you if you’re story is starting in the right place? Second-guessing where things need emphasized, where voice needs heightened, where the sentence structure needs tightened? Then you want the Query Edit Package. It’s a very deep dive into the first impression you make to literary agents, and I make sure that you put your best foot forward.

Phone Consultation

A consult with me is a one hour confidential, creative mastermind that is advice-centered and from the perspective of someone who’s been in the industry for over a decade. Build up your knowledge, assuage your worries, and get yourself going with confidence. We can discuss anything from if you’re plot makes sense to if your main character has enough at stake. We can go over story escalation and how to make sure there’s tension on every page. We can discuss how to self-publish or query agents. Your journey is unique and so special. Get one-on-one advice that takes in all the nuances and specifics of what you want and need.

Full Manuscript Edit

This is a the deepest of dives into your manuscript that also includes inline comments to get as specific as possible with revisions. I heavily focus on elements such as:

*Character chemistry

*Character arc

*Goal, Motivation, Conflict

*Readability and story flow

*Logic

*World Building

*Making sure the story starts in the right place

*Believability/surprise in plot twists

*Story structure

*Dialogue

*Activity on the page and rising tension

*Stakes and escalation

 After a complete and thorough read of your manuscript, you’ll receive:

*On page comments

*Detailed edit report

*Two one hour phone consults

*Revise Your Manuscript Like An Absolute Boss Kit

*Refresh Your Brain and Unleash Your Creativity Meditations

 

$30/1000 words

Full Manuscript Evaluation

Budget-friendly but still incredibly detailed and invaluable, this manuscript evaluaton heavily focuses on elements such as:

*Character chemistry

*Character arc

*Goal, Motivation, Conflict

*Readability and story flow

*Logic

*World Building

*Making sure the story starts in the right place

*Believability/surprise in plot twists

*Story structure

*Dialogue

*Activity on the page and rising tension

*Stakes and escalation

 After a complete and thorough read of your manuscript, you’ll receive:

*Detailed edit report

*Two one hour phone consults

*Revise Your Manuscript Like An Absolute Boss Kit

*Refresh Your Brain and Unleash Your Creativity Meditations 

 

$24/1000 words

"Bethany truly cares about writers.

She wants to make the manuscript better but she also wants to make the writer better. Which is what she’s shown me to do in my editing. She’s thoughtful and considerate, as well as an enthusiastic and wonderful editor. I highly recommend her, especially if you’re looking to level up in craft.”

– Yasmin Angoe, 2020 Sisters in Crime winner and debut author of the smash novel Her Name is Knight, soon to be a TV series 

 

 

"Bethany truly cares about writers.

She wants to make the manuscript better but she also wants to make the writer better. Which is what she’s shown me to do in my editing. She’s thoughtful and considerate, as well as an enthusiastic and wonderful editor. I highly recommend her, especially if you’re looking to level up in craft.”

– Yasmin Angoe, 2020 Sisters in Crime winner and debut author of the smash novel Her Name is Knight, soon to be a TV series 

 

 

"Her feedback is smart, thoughtful

and always helps make for a better book. I highly recommend Bethany’s service to authors in need of an extra set of eagle eyes attached to a very astute mind.” 

– Tiffany Reisz, international bestselling author of the Original Sinners series

 

 

"Bethany took my manuscript and handled it not only with care

but an empathy for the cultural background in which it was written. It is so rare to work with someone who appreciates the subtle nuance of different beliefs and cultures. Bethany worked with mine to elevate the story and characters. I wouldn’t trust anyone else, hands down.”

– George Jreije, MG author repped by Azantian Literary

You matter.

Your story matters.

Frequently Asked Questions

How do I know working with you is right for me?

Great question! And the answer is: I’m not for everybody. 🙂 I’m high energy, optimistic, and use pop culture references probably way too much. I dig very deeply into a manuscript and when I say you’ll get inline comments from me, I mean it. Some of my comments could seriously be pasted into a Word doc and be a full page of feedback. In the words of Ms. Norbury from Mean Girls: “I’m a pusher. I push people.” But I’m also a cheerleader and I point out what’s working as much as what can be strengthened or clarified. I’m as invested as you are into making your manuscript great, so expect tough questions. If that is not your thing, then I’m not your editor.

I also share quite a bit on my Twitter and Instagram, so that should also give you some insight into who I am as well. Cat and dog photos aside, I share writing and editing tips and tricks as well as a smattering of time management posts.  

Do you offer a free sample?

Absolutely. If you’re thinking of working with me and want to see my style, please click here to submit your free first chapter sample.

I hear you have a contract. Do I have to sign it?

I do and yes, you will have to sign a contract if you want to work with me. It’s a very basic contract that’s designed to protect us both. It goes over things like due date, cost, refund policy, confidentiality, and terms and conditions.

What stories are you open to editing?

I’m a scaredy-cat so PLEASE for the love of all things holy, do NOT send me horror. No MG horror, no YA horror, no Adult horror. In fact, don’t even send me Picture Book horror! You will keep me up all night convinced that some…ya know what? I’m not finishing that thought. 

My sweet spots are MG (any genre except horror), YA (any genre except horror), and Adult romance (any sub-genre except, you get the drift.). I read them the most, I edit them the most, I know their tropes and rhythms, expectations and cliches. And if your book happens to have a cute animal sidekick or anything that could comp a River Phoenix movie? What are you waiting for!? Get in touch with me. 

Do you accept payment plans?

For anything under $200, I don’t accept payment plans. But for the Full Edit and Evaluation services, I do require a deposit of half the total cost (which is non-refundable) to hold your spot on my calendar. That deposit must be paid before work begins, and the remaining balanace is due before I send my edits back. However, if you need to break up that latter 50% into smaller pieces, I can absolutely talk with you about that and work something out.

*Discount Option: If you pay your total fee in full at time of signing, you will receive 5% off that total price.

What is your refund policy?

I do not offer refunds for one-on-one services. Because of this, please make sure you take advantage of the free sample edit I offer, so then you can get a real sense of my editorial style. I’ve also outlined below who’d be a great fit for my services and who wouldn’t be so great. Please read that list! Finally, check out the testimonials and look over the feedback example I have on this page. 

When will I recieve the bonuses?

Once you make your final payment to me and I’ve emailed all materials to you, you’ll receive your bonuses. We’ll also make arrangements to schedule your second one hour phone consult.

“[Bethany] was very engaging and her enthusiasm and love for the craft motivated me in my passion to write stories.”

Carole Lynn Jones, children's author published by Flying Ketchup Press

I’m not for everyone! You should only with with me if you are:

 

Open to revisions, suggestions, questions, and having a real discussion about your story and its mechanics. You want to know how it all goes together.

Ready to work. You love your story but you know it's not perfect. And you're ready and excited to fix it.

Eager to grow as a writer. Your ambitious and creative and want to learn all you can about how to write and edit a book.

Willing to have some fun! Editing is tough but it shouldn't be tortorous. I want to help my writers find the joy in writing a book again.

And you should definitely NOT work with me if you are:

 

Unwilling to try new things, think new ways and experiment with different ideas and exercises.

Married to every word on the page and can't bear to delete anything. I know it's hard and it sucks, but deletion is necessary.

Just looking for praise. I definitely point out when things are right, but I am here to evaluate and edit your work. If you will be extremely offended by me telling you to clarify something, I'm not the editor for you.

An I-Know-All-This-Already type of person. Some of my comments will touch on timeless elements of storytelling and you may think pfft, I know this already! But knowing something is very different from executing it correctly. And if you're already coming in with the notion of knowing it all? We are not the best match.

Expecting me to actually rewrite your story. My goal is to teach, motivate and inspire you to become the best writer you can be -- not only for your current manuscript, but all the future ones you'll write, too. This won't happen if I take over your story. This isn't to say I won't get very specifical and offer suggestions, but do not expect sentences, passages, scenes or chapters to be rewritten by me.

I’m not for everyone! You should only with with me if you are:

 

Open to revisions, suggestions, questions, and having a real discussion about your story and its mechanics. You want to know how it all goes together.

Ready to work. You love your story but you know it's not perfect. And you're ready and excited to fix it.

Eager to grow as a writer. Your ambitious and creative and want to learn all you can about how to write and edit a book.

Willing to have some fun! Editing is tough but it shouldn't be tortorous. I want to help my writers find the joy in writing a book again.

And you should definitely NOT work with me if you are:

 

Unwilling to try new things, think new ways and experiment with different ideas and exercises.

Married to every word on the page and can't bear to delete anything. I know it's hard and it sucks, but deletion is necessary.

Just looking for praise. I definitely point out when things are right, but I am here to evaluate and edit your work. If you will be extremely offended by me telling you to clarify something, I'm not the editor for you.

An I-Know-All-This-Already type of person. Some of my comments will touch on timeless elements of storytelling and you may think pfft, I know this already! But knowing something is very different from executing it correctly. And if you're already coming in with the notion of knowing it all? We are not the best match.

Expecting me to actually rewrite your story. My goal is to teach, motivate and inspire you to become the best writer you can be -- not only for your current manuscript, but all the future ones you'll write, too. This won't happen if I take over your story. This isn't to say I won't get very specifical and offer suggestions, but do not expect sentences, passages, scenes or chapters to be rewritten by me.

Choose the services you need.

Query Edit Package

Having trouble boiling down your 100,000 word story into a cohesive, fun, attention-grabbing query? Need some one-on-one, professional eyes to tell you if you’re story is starting in the right place? Second-guessing where things need emphasized, where voice needs heightened, where the sentence structure needs tightened? Then you want the Query Edit Package. It’s a very deep dive into the first impression you make to literary agents, and I make sure that you put your best foot forward. 

Phone Consultation

A consult with me is a one hour confidential, creative mastermind that is advice-centered and from the perspective of someone who’s been in the industry for over a decade. Build up your knowledge, assuage your worries, and get yourself going with confidence. We can discuss anything from if you’re plot makes sense to if your main character has enough at stake. We can go over story escalation and how to make sure there’s tension on every page. We can discuss how to self-publish or query agents. Your journey is unique and so special. Get one-on-one advice that takes in all the nuances and specifics of what you want and need.

Full Manuscript Edit

This is a the deepest of dives into your manuscript that also includes inline comments to get as specific as possible with revisions. I heavily focus on elements such as:

*Character chemistry

*Character arc

*Goal, Motivation, Conflict

*Readability and story flow

*Logic

*World Building

*Making sure the story starts in the right place

*Believability/surprise in plot twists

*Story structure

*Dialogue

*Activity on the page and rising tension

*Stakes and escalation

After a complete and thorough read of your manuscript, you’ll receive:

*On page comments

*Detailed edit report

*Two one hour phone consults

*Revise Your Manuscript Like An Absolute Boss Kit

*Refresh Your Brain and Unleash Your Creativity Meditations

 

$30/1000 words

Full Manuscript Evaluation

Budget-friendly but still incredibly detailed and invaluable, this manuscript evaluaton heavily focuses on elements such as:

*Character chemistry

*Character arc

*Goal, Motivation, Conflict

*Readability and story flow

*Logic

*World Building

*Making sure the story starts in the right place

*Believability/surprise in plot twists

*Story structure

*Dialogue

*Activity on the page and rising tension

*Stakes and escalation

 After a complete and thorough read of your manuscript, you’ll receive:

*Detailed edit report

*Two one hour phone consults

*Revise Your Manuscript Like An Absolute Boss Kit

*Refresh Your Brain and Unleash Your Creativity Meditations 

 

 

$24/1000 words

Choose the services you need.

Query Edit Package

Having trouble boiling down your 100,000 word story into a cohesive, fun, attention-grabbing query? Need some one-on-one, professional eyes to tell you if you’re story is starting in the right place? Second-guessing where things need emphasized, where voice needs heightened, where the sentence structure needs tightened? Then you want the Query Edit Package. It’s a very deep dive into the first impression you make to literary agents, and I make sure that you put your best foot forward.

Phone Consultation

A consult with me is a one hour confidential, creative mastermind that is advice-centered and from the perspective of someone who’s been in the industry for over a decade. Build up your knowledge, assuage your worries, and get yourself going with confidence. We can discuss anything from if you’re plot makes sense to if your main character has enough at stake. We can go over story escalation and how to make sure there’s tension on every page. We can discuss how to self-publish or query agents. Your journey is unique and so special. Get one-on-one advice that takes in all the nuances and specifics of what you want and need.

Full Manuscript Edit

This is a the deepest of dives into your manuscript that also includes inline comments to get as specific as possible with revisions. I heavily focus on elements such as:

*Character chemistry

*Character arc

*Goal, Motivation, Conflict

*Readability and story flow

*Logic

*World Building

*Making sure the story starts in the right place

*Believability/surprise in plot twists

*Story structure

*Dialogue

*Activity on the page and rising tension

*Stakes and escalation

 After a complete and thorough read of your manuscript, you’ll receive:

*On page comments

*Detailed edit report

*Two one hour phone consults 

*Revise Your Manuscript Like An Absolute Boss Kit

*Refresh Your Brain and Unleash Your Creativity Meditations

 

$30/1000 words

Full Manuscript Evaluation

Budget-friendly but still incredibly detailed and invaluable, this manuscript evaluaton heavily focuses on elements such as:

*Character chemistry

*Character arc

*Goal, Motivation, Conflict

*Readability and story flow

*Logic

*World Building

*Making sure the story starts in the right place

*Believability/surprise in plot twists

*Story structure

*Dialogue

*Activity on the page and rising tension

*Stakes and escalation

After a complete and thorough read of your manuscript, you’ll receive:

*Detailed edit report

*Two one hour phone consults

*Revise Your Manuscript Like An Absolute Boss Kit

*Refresh Your Brain and Unleash Your Creativity Meditations 

 

 

$24/1000 words

Believe

in your story

in your creativity

in your passion

in your abilities

in your drive

in your determination

in your ideas

in your yourself.

 

Believe

in your story

in your creativity

in your passion

in your abilities

in your drive

in your determination

in your ideas

in your yourself.