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PREMIUM LIVE ROUND
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you have the talent. now unlock your story's fullest potential.
Super Amazing Story Thing
Say goodbye to endless rewrites, tweaking and stalled out second guessing. No more feeling lost in your own work.
Instead, in just six weeks, you'll work side-by-side with me (professional editor here 🙋🏻♀️) to develop razor-sharp editorial instincts, strengthen your storytelling skills, and learn how to take any rough draft to a polished, finished story.
FOR AUTHORS WHO AREN'T JUST WRITING A BOOK. THEY'RE BUILDING A CAREER. JOIN THIS SPECIAL, LIVE ROUND NOW.
REAL TALK —
You know how to write.
Let's be honest, you do. You've probably been writing for a while, and this probably isn't your first manuscript. You know what a character is, you know what a plot is. You know all that stuff. You know you're talented.
But there are things that aren't quite clicking in your story. Pacing drags, characters feel flat. It's just not zinging.
So you move scenes. Rewrite chapters. Cut things. Add things. Rinse. Repeat and the months or YEARS are passing by.
And you wonder: are you actually making your book better? Or just making it different?
oh, yeah...
You don't have a writing problem. You have an editing one.
- Editing is all about the choices of your story and which ones to make.
- It's about discernment, knowing when something is done and when it needs more structure.
- It's about direction and momentum.
- It's about knowing when a scene is done.
- It's about making the most subtle changes to enhance the book's mood and atmosphere.
- These are things you uncover, add and strengthen during edits.
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Editing isn't just deleting words and calling it a day.
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It's how you make your book come alive.
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And Super Amazing Story Thing teaches you how.
HI,I'm bethany —
I help writers
MAKE THEIR GOOD STORIES GREAT.
We're not just building a stronger story. We're building a stronger storyteller.
I tell my students and my clients this all the time: the magic happens in the revision. And it's so true. It's where the pencil sketch becomes the fully painted mural, where the notes become the symphony. Editing is where your story comes alive.
Developing your editorial judgement and skill is how you give your book the best chance to be seen by as many readers as possible — and you're going to learn how over the next six weeks.
"I got agented."
Bethany’s unique writing [lessons] are NEXT LEVEL! With her help, I was able to sculpt my novel and get agented. She really knows her stuff!!
Emily Rae, represented by Mushens Entertainment
"Helped me with the most daunting revision."
Bethany helped me the most with the daunting revision process. The roadmaps and exercises helped with making me rethink my characters and returning to what exactly I had in mind when I started the draft. They’re a very useful tool for a high-level overview and a way to outline before starting the first draft to limit the amount of future revisions Thank you again!
"It was lifechanging."
It was lifechanging. I knocked my book out in three months because of it, and on my way to being agented! I’m one of your success stories.”
Chrissy, MG author repped by CMA Lit
introducing:
THE SUPER AMAZING STORY THING
*actual name forthcoming
Join the Sweet 16 as we go through the system that has helped my writers finish their stories, confidently query or self-pub, and get agented, get book deals and win awards. Spots are limited to just 16 for this live, premium round so save your seat now!
Don't sleep on this skill! Knowing how to critically see your draft and recognize what needs fixing and how lets you build stronger books, make confident creative decisions, and develop the skills you need to go after an author career.
the plan
Here's how this works:
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Join & Save Your Seat
We begin January 10, 2027 with a live, epic kick off call. First class is the following Tuesday at 7pm ET. Because this is a live round with feedback, seats are limited. First come, first serve so be sure to get your spot.
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Choose Your Manuscript
One of the purposes of the Super Amazing Story Thing is for your story to get better as we go. That's why we're not using generic templates or already-published books as examples. We're working on your stuff. So choose your manuscript.
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Show Up, Apply, Change
We meet weekly for six weeks, and during that time, we're going to move with focus, purpose, and strategy. Show up and do the work and see it in your pages.
WHAT'S INSIDE
During our six weeks together, you get:
Six Weeks of Live Zoom Calls With Bethany
We are diving DEEP here! You and me will go over a different aspect of story every week - from character journey and chemistry to pacing to scene economics and magic logic. Every lesson is purposeful and strategic with a goal to show you exactly how to edit each one. I'm going to personally walk you through the editorial guidance I give my private, 1:1 writers that has helped them finish, query, get agented, and win awards.
Weekly Assignments & Open Q&A
The magic is in the doing, and you'll be David Copperfield by the time we're done! Because frankly, it's not enough to just edit with me once a week. You have to work with your manuscript to really see results. Nothing inside is theory or put up against examples of books already published. Every exercise will be on your own story so you can see rapid results.
My Eyes On Your Work
Not only will I be reading your first 10 pages BEFORE you really begin edits on them, but I'll then read them after the eight weeks we're together. Then, we'll go over my feedback in our own private 1:1 session.
Ready to Join Me?
"I can go on and on about how insightful and brilliant Bethany is, but TL;DR: Bethany is the best and if you want to improve your MS you need her!”
– jesse sutanto, bestselling author of dial a for aunties
"Her feedback is smart, thoughtful and always helps make for a better book. I highly recommend Bethany’s service to authors in need of an extra set of eagle eyes attached to a very astute mind."
– tiffany reisz, usa today bestseller
"It is so rare to work with someone who appreciates the subtle nuance of different beliefs and cultures. Bethany worked with mine to elevate the story and characters. I wouldn’t trust anyone else, hands down.”
– George Jreije, MG author repped by Azantian LiterarY
"Not only did [she] make me realize the exact issues within my current WIP, but she also presented solutions to resolve those problems. These solutions truly gave me lightbulb moments during the classes. Thank you so much, Bethany, for helping me with my writer confidence and plot and character issues"
– ERICA O, YA author
"The lessons reshaped the way I think about writing…oh, and I may or may not have gotten an offer after I revised based on things I learned."
– demi schwartz, repped by spencerhill associates
"When I needed her most, Bethany came to my rescue with succinct edits and a can-do attitude. Her suggestions were thoughtful, insightful, and made my work shine in a way I never would have been able to do on my own."
– anthony nerada, repped by deborah harris agency
is this for you?
The Super Amazing Story Thing
is for you if:
You're a writer who takes your writing seriously. You want it to be a career.
You’ve been working with your story for a while and you're feeling lost in it.
You want to save time and energy and get the guidance and expertise to learn how to make your book amazing.
You’re tired of piecing together free advice and want one cohesive strategy
You’re coachable, committed, and willing to actually implement the stuff (non-negotiable)
Ready to get started?
Join the January live, premium round
Join Full Access
$1249
*PLEASE CONTACT ME AT [email protected] IF YOU NEED TO MAKE A PAYMENT PLAN ARRANGEMENT
- 6 weeks of live Zoom sessions (Tuesdays 7pm ET)
- Weekly assignments
- Open Q&A
- A private "before and after" session with me where I'll review your first 10 pages with you
- All sessions recorded
- Lifetime access to recordings
- A fraction of the cost of 1:1 private coaching/editorial services
I'm going to be completely upfront
A note about your investment.
This is an intimate, live experience with limited seats, personalized instruction, and individual manuscript feedback. Because of this, all purchases are final and no refunds will be given at any time for any reason.
Here's what I want you to know:
I've been helping authors for a long time. I've read their story from page one to The End and helped them strengthen their manuscripts, navigate really difficult revisions and decisions, and develop the confidence to go to the next stage with their stories.
And I'm bringing all that experience into this program to teach you the editorial skills I use every day.
Will your manuscript be completely revised in six weeks? Probably not, because most books take a second or third round to really get to the level of query or publish ready.
But the purpose of our time together is that you'll develop a clearer understanding of how stories work, how to identify what's weakening yours, and how to make targeted, impactful changes to your story.
That's the skill we're building together.
I got you. ❤️